Re: Interface Zero: Upgrade in Progress
Postat: mån 30 sep 2013, 09:24
Cool. I think Almighty and Mal/Serenity could know each other from before. Being 2.0's from wealthy & powerful families, being rich, working in the corporate sphere, being good shots and having an interest in adventure; we have a lot in common. At least acquaintances, probably with a budding friendship.
Almighty will tease you about the girly code name, however, even if he shares your abnormality in strength
By my count you have one more skill point to use, but I could be wrong.
Your story also got more confusing and less consistent, but I'm glad there's more of your family still alive. It's not clear why you would be responsible for your niece, and the status of your father is unclear (not that my own story is developed, mind you). Also, where is the Reynolds family based, since it's not Chicago?
You still claim extensive training in the arts of "fixing", but you lack both the skills and the occupation, so the training must have been in something else (and you may well have had it earlier, since you already worked as an agent). And since you work as an agent instead of fixer, how do you acquire the intel you feed to Stopwatch? Do you work somewhere under cover, or do you go in and out more quickly and forcefully?
What you intend to do with the private eyes is also less clear now that you yourself are an agent, instead of a fixer unable to do things himself.
What augments and equipment you're going for will be interesting to hear. With all the credits from being rich in addition to the Stopwatch funds, you're going to afford a lot of equipment. And unlike Almighty it's all going to be stuff you carry on you.
Almighty will tease you about the girly code name, however, even if he shares your abnormality in strength
By my count you have one more skill point to use, but I could be wrong.
Your story also got more confusing and less consistent, but I'm glad there's more of your family still alive. It's not clear why you would be responsible for your niece, and the status of your father is unclear (not that my own story is developed, mind you). Also, where is the Reynolds family based, since it's not Chicago?
You still claim extensive training in the arts of "fixing", but you lack both the skills and the occupation, so the training must have been in something else (and you may well have had it earlier, since you already worked as an agent). And since you work as an agent instead of fixer, how do you acquire the intel you feed to Stopwatch? Do you work somewhere under cover, or do you go in and out more quickly and forcefully?
What you intend to do with the private eyes is also less clear now that you yourself are an agent, instead of a fixer unable to do things himself.
What augments and equipment you're going for will be interesting to hear. With all the credits from being rich in addition to the Stopwatch funds, you're going to afford a lot of equipment. And unlike Almighty it's all going to be stuff you carry on you.